That was a great read.
The progress Jason made from his horrific existence to the almost perfect one is amazing, the transformation is breathtaking. I did not even mind a lot of repetition in the plot. If anything, it gives you a very clear idea of what Jason was going through - same kind of abuse day after day after day of his very short life.
Granted, there were a lot of typos, editorial and grammatical errors with plethora of inconsistencies. But on the great scheme of things, they did not carry a lot of weight for me personally. However there are some unresolved issues that I (again - personally) think needed to be taken care of. Therefore - 4 stars.