Cake (Blood Nation, #1)

Cake (Blood Nation, #1) - Derekica Snake I did manage to survive another 10%, totaling 60%, just for the pleasure of giving it 1 star (applying the good old rounding up rule).

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Eighteen months ago, I was a fat, nasty, legally blind, computer programmer who decided to try his chubby hand at industrial espionage.

Is it just me who feels a little uncomfortable, reading this part? You, know... me being "fat and chubby" and "legally blind" computer geek... Interesting how nasty it sounds in this sentence, especially being put together with "nasty" - he-he ~:/ Clear as day, the author herself has some major issues with self-image..... Is this what the book is all about? Unless ...politically incorrect much? *snicker*

During which time he reshaped my body; fixed my vision and broke me psychologically into three pieces.

Read "continuously raped" instead "reshaped"; "forced" instead of "fixed" (oh, don't get me wrong, there WAS a choice - be a vampire and a vampire's sex toy or be brain-dead and a vampire's sex toy); "broke me..." that one is true, considering all the abuse and mindf*ck that's going on.

No respect for English language, either. Grammar, spelling, punctuation... - you name it, it's all subject to abuse as well.

PS
My english isn't perfect, but I don't publish crap I charge people 10 bucks for.

Mammarella

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