I am reading the series from book #1 and on and I hafta tell ya that after book two all the colloquials really start gettin' on one's nerves.
I am also annoyed with Jory for not being able to say a firm "no" to his multiple fans and admirers and stick with it, instead inviting their advances by continuing to kiss, touch, going to lunches/dinners, answering the phone etc.
Otherwise - pretty good read :) Jory is fun, despite the obvious ADD.
Not sure how to rate it, somewhere between 3.5 and 4, but I think this book is better than the previous ones. 4 stars then :)