Nice story, but only 3 stars.
Please, please, please - fix Russian! There are so many Russian members here that will gladly provide their help with the language, that it's a shame to leave misspelled words and awkward sentences the way they are.
Stumbled upon this somehow, read through first 5 pages. Gah...
FIX THAT DAMN RUSSIAN ALREADY!
I think I am going to add a new tag "beware - butchered foreign language"