I give the first story (by Stormy Glenn) 4 stars.
The dom, Rafe scared me and not in a good, bdsm, way.
I was seriously afraid for Denny from the very moment Rafe lashed out at him at the club because of another dom and up until they made up in the end. But I think they'll be OK.
The second story (by H.C.Brown) was too chaotic for my taste - 2 stars. It seemed that control was not the only thing that was slipping away from the dom, Nash, but logic and sanity as well. What did Paul see in him is beyond me.