(In)visible by Anyta Sunday

(In)visible - Anyta Sunday

On page 2. Ahhhh.... nothing like a dangling modifier to open the story with.

 

"I lunged for him as he lost his second footing. Gripping the collar, the pup struggled."

 

Sorry, have to mention, it's my pet peeve of epic proportions :/

Mammarella

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