Sacred Fate by Eressë

Sacred Fate - Eressë

I strongly dislike the pretentious language the author is so fond of.

 

Proclitics are overused. Instead of providing an old time charm 'tis a major annoyance. Top it with very frequent info dumps that tell you absolutely nothing you need to know (like plumbing - who gives a crap where and how they did their #1s & #2s. It's not relevant to anything, so wth?) and you find yourself dozing off every 3-4 pages.

 

 PS What's with the cover and overlapping heads? Escher much?

 

 

Oh... oh.... I forget - they bend space. 

Mammarella

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