This is sooooo messed up! The books is zig-zagging back and forth, backtracking, side-stepping, leaving piles of info dumps every page or two, confusion and mayhem await for you all over the place. There are so many different aliens and made up names, new ones every other paragraph, my head spins... @.@
And then there is this:
"The guy was massive, a half meter below three meters tall." Um... that's like... two and a half meters, dude!